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Drabble: Cobalt

After the last two weeks of manic posting in a million places, I've come back to earth with a bump. What am I going to do with myself?

Oh, yeah. WIP.

As my headspace is still all things Illyria, I thought I'd get that Tangly!Illyria plot bunny soundingsea put there, out of my head first with a drabble. It's been a while and I thought I'd offer it to kallysten's 2005 drabble challenge.:

A bit sexy, a bit influenced by Kafka:

(Spike/Illyria (in her original form), AtS Post Not Fade Away. Inspired by a challenge from Soundingsea)

Sex with Illyria is an experience to say the least.

Battlesuit and humanity stripped away, she’s alien, sensuous, and toxically erotic. Her large cobalt eyes are expressionless, and yet they somehow connect. She knows Spike’s needs and she desires to please.

Limbs, a writhing nest of tentacles, feel like an orgy of hands, caressing, and tweaking; holding him in the tangled safety of her embrace as they tease. He doesn’t know what she gets from their unions, but he doesn’t care now; for a soft, shiny tendril coils gently round his cock for another sinuous stroke, and he just submits.


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Ooooooh - really nicely done.
toxically erotic
The tangling body parts made me think of Shiva, God of Destruction - which is a nice image for Illyria.
::pets your WIP too::

I should thought of Shiva, lots of avenues for that to go down...

Poor WIP, all lonely and neglected. Mummy will make it better soon.

Thinking about it, Illyria is Kali.

In a wriggling, undulating sort of way. :D

Disturbing, but very well done!

I don't know what it says about me that all the sex I've written about so far has been either awful or disturbing!

Great stuff, but where do you get your ideas?! Was this why you asked about squid? Hee! All hail queen of the disturbing sex ficlets! Remember the Harmony one? Ah...good times, for me, anyway! :D

soundingsea started it, I just went with it.

I asked about squid for the rubbery kiss from 12 Days - that was based on Vin Diesel in xXx. Bleugh kissing! Figured Illyria would have had little practice.

I think situations people don't normally write are more interesting for me to do.

Ooh, I love this! Unusual, to be sure, but strangely erotic!! Nice one!

Who wants vanilla, when you could have this!


Beautifully written, strangely erotic yewww, but... YEWWWW! Put him down, squid-thing!

But he likes it. She tickles his willy...

Hijacking to say...
Heehee! Willy makes me laugh. Wee willy makes me laugh hardest. Hahaha! I said 'hardest'! I crack myself up!

Willy's willy isn't wee.

Okay, okay...he's hung like a horse!
A horsey squid-loving, horsey thing. :D

Oh, I like this! Strange, and strangely appealing!

And strangest of all -- "she desires to please", you write...and I believe you! ;-)

It is meant to be a nice experience, just deeply unusual. It's a bit Sci Fi really.

Oh, and now you why I was so interested in squid and things crawly.

Ooh, I'm throwing all my plot bunnies your way. Very cool. :) Very hentai.

Shame I was only allowed 100 words, I wanted to get a line in about 'slinking through his hair, they pulled it back for a dozen snakes to slide up his throat' or something, but I'm a stickler.

Thanks for the inspiration, but I don't want all your bunnies my own a ruining the garden with their burrows. :)

Eep! See what you mean about the tentacles! Very sexy!

And who'd leave that to rescue Angel, eh?

Well, maybe she's got some spare tentacles that coud go and do that, without Spike even noticing the absence?

Then she could tickle both at once.

Well, there obviously aren't enough Spyllirangel fics in the world. Got to start somewhere.

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