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Fic: Twelve Days Part Five

Of course, calove wrote yesterday's Twelve Days installment. With Ilona as a guest star, who else could it have been?

There's no surprises for guessing who wrote today's part either, for it is the debut of my Cordelia chapter that I struggled so much with . Don't laugh too hard at it:


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Delightful. Spot-on Illyria, of course; and the Cordy/Harmony scene is lovely. It brings back precious memories of Cordy/Xander, when the sniping between them with all its resentful but lustful undercurrents made "Ted" into a classic instead of a tedious Monster-of-the-Week also-ran. I can just picture her flaunting Damon's ring in public but treasuring Xander's ring in private, quite possibly sleeping with it under her pillow, right up until the day she came home from hospital following her rebar injury and almost certainly threw the ring in the trash. Crying as she did so.

Thanks. I could babble on like Illyria all day, I find her the easiest character to write by far (bar Spike).

I watched Ted as research, for the first time in ages. It was nowhere near as bad as I had thought (possibly due to the fact I get bored when there's no Spike and I'm watching them in order!). I found Cordy extremely difficult to write, never again.

I can just picture her flaunting Damon's ring in public but treasuring Xander's ring in private, quite possibly sleeping with it under her pillow, right up until the day she came home from hospital following her rebar injury and almost certainly threw the ring in the trash. Crying as she did so.

Of course she did.

I only skimmed because I'm behind on reading the previous chapters, but it looked good to me!

Thanks. I thought it wasn't really up to the standard I like it to be. I was very hard for me to write.

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